tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post2942901879320512145..comments2023-10-08T11:44:08.236-04:00Comments on * AT THE BIJOU *: IT'S NOT YOU ~ By Ryn CricketKate Pilarcik ~ absolutelyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12430278736281847787noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-60703769131496811482010-03-10T15:52:33.871-05:002010-03-10T15:52:33.871-05:00:( Life is not fair.:( Life is not fair.Jelenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02614480591276389884noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-81368069481693494222010-03-10T00:38:51.486-05:002010-03-10T00:38:51.486-05:00Harry, this is just me, but I think they will end ...Harry, this is just me, but I think they will end up alone. I think it sealed the deal --so to speak. I was tempted to call this "Breaking up the set" but I thought maybe it was too forward. Jeanette and Carrie, I have to admit that the ending came a day after the opening dialogue and I was a bit surprised by it too. Hazar, you are so supportive! I appreciate that so much.Ryn Crickethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01857868411200909396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-91608679737416184732010-03-09T17:52:17.442-05:002010-03-09T17:52:17.442-05:00So, I wonder if they'll carry on with their pl...So, I wonder if they'll carry on with their plans to divorce or be reunited in their grief? I was sure the phone call was going to be about the dad, making mom's speech rather unnecessary. But offing the kids??? That really jerked the camera into a whole nuther focus, turns out It WAS Them! Pretty tricky Ryn!Harryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628269009060185397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-24608518576121135732010-03-09T16:19:05.430-05:002010-03-09T16:19:05.430-05:00Ryn, My first remark was for something else, sorry...Ryn, My first remark was for something else, sorry. Great twist in the end. But, I didn't want this to end. My imagination ran wild at the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-82315990713623158832010-03-09T13:06:26.518-05:002010-03-09T13:06:26.518-05:00OUCH. Heartwrenching ending RYN. Evil sneak. Great...OUCH. Heartwrenching ending RYN. Evil sneak. Great short.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-70637221354471971522010-03-09T10:45:56.635-05:002010-03-09T10:45:56.635-05:00The turns unfold like the moment in a movie that f...The turns unfold like the moment in a movie that finds you not looking (The way that I felt watching Christopher Nolan''The Prestige' for the first time, and even after other viewings, for how beautiful the movie was). The piece has a very strong lifeforce that you were able to capture in a manner that was powerful, elegant, and organic. To pull this off in such a precise space as you have did signfies a mind that has hold of her craft so well... and so knowingly.<br /><br />When I read pieces such as these, I am thankful for writers like youurself and for a writers site like 'At the Bijou'.HZar Worthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02002662610224285707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-51316220625890083432010-03-09T10:04:46.305-05:002010-03-09T10:04:46.305-05:00amen amenamen amenMichael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-55404487812365414162010-03-09T09:52:34.155-05:002010-03-09T09:52:34.155-05:00Amen!Amen!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com