tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post6906662542908730551..comments2023-10-08T11:44:08.236-04:00Comments on * AT THE BIJOU *: "DON'T LOOK!" ~ By Zelda Martin and Harry B. Sanderford of Harbinger*33Kate Pilarcik ~ absolutelyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12430278736281847787noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-29897253985648061592010-11-01T10:07:09.393-04:002010-11-01T10:07:09.393-04:00Thanks Kevin!Thanks Kevin!Harryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628269009060185397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-70829278171725058132010-11-01T07:05:34.402-04:002010-11-01T07:05:34.402-04:00Excellent Halloween story - creepy and eerie, with...Excellent Halloween story - creepy and eerie, with just the right touch of spookiness thrown in. Well done!<br />KMKevin Michaelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00703125974467675009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-47937853221383286842010-10-31T17:19:26.601-04:002010-10-31T17:19:26.601-04:00Wow! How often can a couple of hack writers (pun ...Wow! How often can a couple of hack writers (pun intended) get praised for having fun? I am so glad that you all appreciated our fledgling attempts at "horror."<br /><br />Maybe next Halloween we'll make you afraid to go into your attic, or maybe the back yard, or the bathroom!<br /><br />And thank you, Kate, for providing the perfect venue for our tale.Madam Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00136166772469538966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-3970252102146031592010-10-31T14:37:16.046-04:002010-10-31T14:37:16.046-04:00Thanks alot for all the kind comments everyone! Co...Thanks alot for all the kind comments everyone! Conjuring these up has become a Halloween tradition for Madam Z & Me. I hope all of your trick or treat sacks are full (with no rocks)! Happy Halloween!Harryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628269009060185397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-1471362364375162642010-10-31T14:02:56.537-04:002010-10-31T14:02:56.537-04:00Nice way you built tension through this piece by p...Nice way you built tension through this piece by pointing at the open door and then delaying through the pacing.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-25112889430745931542010-10-31T12:44:44.498-04:002010-10-31T12:44:44.498-04:00You two do pen excellent spinetingling suspense. I...You two do pen excellent spinetingling suspense. I loved the easy voice of this and how it leads to absolute horror. I like Paul's assessment of Dr. Suess meets Wes Craven-indeed! Yuo two would make such romantic serial killers. ;-D<br /><br />Happy Halloween!Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-84830139573755047362010-10-31T12:35:30.188-04:002010-10-31T12:35:30.188-04:00Wowzer. I shoulda stopped reading at Fluffy. But t...Wowzer. I shoulda stopped reading at Fluffy. But then y'all knew -- KNEW -- I couldn't. Thanks for not disappointing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-18663187946420249352010-10-31T12:30:56.486-04:002010-10-31T12:30:56.486-04:00Brilliantly written, it grabbed me all the way thr...Brilliantly written, it grabbed me all the way through, and I love the way all the venom comes out of her.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-21300820825985254762010-10-30T12:16:49.449-04:002010-10-30T12:16:49.449-04:00I knew there was a reason for my fear of basements...I knew there was a reason for my fear of basements...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-62251977139720534602010-10-30T03:28:44.814-04:002010-10-30T03:28:44.814-04:00And a fine job you did building suspense and revea...And a fine job you did building suspense and revealing the monster at just the right moment... When it's too late to escape, of course. You two can do anything.Pamila Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-47696242921318025972010-10-30T00:20:56.466-04:002010-10-30T00:20:56.466-04:00Jeanette's take on you two terrifiers of abase...Jeanette's take on you two terrifiers of abasements in the basement was slick, SLICK, SLICK!<br /><br />( still got grin ) ~ A*KKate Pilarcik ~ absolutelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12430278736281847787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-63913647290565111162010-10-30T00:12:38.527-04:002010-10-30T00:12:38.527-04:00Okay you two, you upset me with Fluffy, then Pugsy...Okay you two, you upset me with Fluffy, then Pugsy, then it continued. I had just watched a similar story on CSI so the visual was dramatic. Then the twist at the end with Johnny and Daddy, My God you people are sick! SICK, SICK. But! I am too. I loved it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-40977125870756945842010-10-29T12:42:56.343-04:002010-10-29T12:42:56.343-04:00I just love basements, they always seem like they ...I just love basements, they always seem like they have a story buried in their bowels. And in this case it was one suspenseful, creepfest! Awesome :-)shannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17063218369150683990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-36744882669919794072010-10-29T12:19:41.786-04:002010-10-29T12:19:41.786-04:00Until I read this, the only scary thing I knew abo...Until I read this, the only scary thing I knew about basements was that Mrs. Fisher's son still lived in hers, until they moved away. <br /><br />Good thing it's bright and sunny here as I read this. Though, I know that homicidal kids are worse than any spooky creature around.<br /><br />Great job in bringing the shivers!<br /><br />Sad about Fluffy.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-37624356355729496812010-10-29T00:13:21.978-04:002010-10-29T00:13:21.978-04:00My God ~ reading this was like unweaving the NYCit...My God ~ reading this was like unweaving the NYCity of spider webs. I was never sure where I was goin' -- but I just creepily kept going. (You guys are that good).<br /><br />Holy alliteration Dynamic Duo! I was getting creeped out yet more at "every crusty carton and corrugated crypt". I roared at the tunnel vision of LIONEL and new my curiousity was getting as notorious as your back and forth phrasing, kinda stacking up now. From each crittered box to danger's door left unlocked, I forgot to listen.<br /><br />I looked.<br />I was scared.<br />But I'm glad I looked.<br />You guys write-scare so swell!<br /><br />THANKS ZELDA AND HARRY FOR SPOOKIFYING Z'S FAVE HOWLADAY over at your other theatre for the mind home ~ AT THE BIJOU.<br /><br />~ Absolutely*Kate,<br />thinkin' Elinor has issuesKate Pilarcik ~ absolutelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12430278736281847787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-73720102568421501392010-10-28T07:28:31.238-04:002010-10-28T07:28:31.238-04:00Deep into the darkness creepy cryptic critters and...Deep into the darkness creepy cryptic critters and a cat killer too! Halloween just wouldn't be complete without you two stirring up a cauldron of words to charm us!Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05054277672531335396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-59950251730713547382010-10-28T06:36:00.198-04:002010-10-28T06:36:00.198-04:00Eww. Thanks for the Absolutely(!!) creepy tales th...Eww. Thanks for the Absolutely(!!) creepy tales this morning yous two!Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-52079338321867767462010-10-28T06:23:14.190-04:002010-10-28T06:23:14.190-04:00Hot-damn!!
Dr.Seuss meets Wes Craven!
You two rea...Hot-damn!! <br />Dr.Seuss meets Wes Craven!<br />You two really know how to tell a story (or two)...this absolutely rocked!!!Crybbe666https://www.blogger.com/profile/14752123812270914073noreply@blogger.com