tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post7496678320600666028..comments2023-10-08T11:44:08.236-04:00Comments on * AT THE BIJOU *: SUPR-ICE CREAM ~ debuting Author Jim Bronyaur AT THE BIJOUKate Pilarcik ~ absolutelyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12430278736281847787noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-6915971813838994632010-04-19T00:37:12.058-04:002010-04-19T00:37:12.058-04:00What a great tale. I did NOT see that coming. Go...What a great tale. I did NOT see that coming. Good noir feel, well told. I was feeling like the middle was dragging with the mention of the kid over and over, but I saw the brilliance of that (to hypnotize the reader into Larry's mindset and distract the reader the way Larry was) at the end. Very well done.Alliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16688259930865787451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-85455929445463654732010-04-17T13:28:51.969-04:002010-04-17T13:28:51.969-04:00Very well done. enjoyed that a lot.Very well done. enjoyed that a lot.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-62612977026536526272010-04-16T14:51:49.297-04:002010-04-16T14:51:49.297-04:00My guess is... the boy grew up to be Pretty Boy Fl...My guess is... the boy grew up to be Pretty Boy Floyd. Welcome Jim.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-49569339697192784322010-04-16T08:43:13.068-04:002010-04-16T08:43:13.068-04:00WOW! Thanks for the welcome from Kate and everyon...WOW! Thanks for the welcome from Kate and everyone else. . . what an awesome site! :)<br /><br />So glad I found it and was able to be apart of it.<br /><br />JimJim Bronyaurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09580674307591916148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-78514842940461043762010-04-16T06:42:13.557-04:002010-04-16T06:42:13.557-04:00Poor Larry. Doesn't it suck when the fool wind...Poor Larry. Doesn't it suck when the fool winds up being you? Great Bijou debut Jim!Harryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628269009060185397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-88881705378853342582010-04-15T18:30:32.520-04:002010-04-15T18:30:32.520-04:00I'll take that Mexitini Ms Carrie and *clink* ...I'll take that Mexitini Ms Carrie and *clink* it to Jim's justifiable wise guy debut. Should Mr Paul come to call I'll answer without a "Yeah?" and snap to the sounds of the ice cream truck comin' faster than you can mumble 'double-dip'.<br /><br />JIM ~ I feel bad -- Larry was growin' on me even before I smiled at his hefty breakfast scene. That killer had heart. Billy now - that brat's headed for a life o'crime. I can see it comin.<br /><br />Nice to see you comin' round too Mr Solender sir and playwright Debbie. Curtain's sure raisin' on a lotta good folks AT THE BIJOU! ~ Absolutely*KateKate Pilarcik ~ absolutelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12430278736281847787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-82775171282668670382010-04-15T18:12:38.781-04:002010-04-15T18:12:38.781-04:00I love it! I'll keep dragging in the good ones...I love it! I'll keep dragging in the good ones for you Kate. You know I will. [Mexican Martini] Drink one on me. <3Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-3460594310422055212010-04-15T17:35:04.730-04:002010-04-15T17:35:04.730-04:00Bravo to Jim! What is it about wise guys that is ...Bravo to Jim! What is it about wise guys that is so enticing? Great story!Debbie Lamedmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17595138309818406148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6243178661707887834.post-14757420774527747582010-04-15T17:06:09.558-04:002010-04-15T17:06:09.558-04:00engaging and definitely a different type of tale, ...engaging and definitely a different type of tale, good pace and payoff.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.com