SHE PUT A SPELL
ON HE
ON HE
~ By Absolutely*Kate ~
Ooooh, the time was right ~ the waning moon speckled perspicacious light. Aye, focal clarity churned Braeden's insight. She knew as her due that a Law of Exchange was far from taboo where genuine gypsy majick wended sensual spiral true.
"Power of the hours,
with good for all,
make the scornface have his fall."
Tonalities eroticized rhythmic chant ~ gutteral, primal, flaring NEED. Indeed, far from desire is need. Deep in the valley of earth, to exist, she required seed.
Pride goes before a fall. Craven swaggered the front hall. Pretense? Now, none at all. Quick! Carnelian candle lit. Dip - went - the - wick.
© 2011, Absolutely*Kate,
feelin' bewitchy . . .
Flickering photo ala gypsymagic spellcasting
10 comments:
A little bit of fall 'majik' goes a long way! Love your flickering flash - The Goddess goes under, into her slumber. You've painted this well, Kate.
Well Kate my girl you have certainly weaved a majik spell here!
Hubble bubble toil and trouble,
Kate's got magic in her words.
A sprinkle here and a sprinkle there
she weaves a tale we want to share!
Pure magic!
helen-scribbles.com
Ah, two goddesses above alight AT THE BIJOU! Grace o'thanks to ye enigmatic ERIN and halo HELEN.
I concur with my pal Ralph Waldo: " "What lies behind us and lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us."
Primally speaking, natch.
~ Absolutely*Kate
The wordplay is wondrous with delicious word choices underlaid with a sense of magic that melds the story into a whole.
Excellent blending of words here. The rhythm is mesmerizing. You didn't just put a spell on me, did you? :)
Wow, that was a sweltering little ditty, for sure. Still not sure if it was your intention, but I got a crazy mix of the spell and desire, kind of like double meanings/ imagery. Maybe I'm wrong. No matter, it was just plain cool.
Those spells cast shall e'er last oh Boyz I admire a'plenty 'round wild WebTowne!
Intuitive AIDAN, sensational crimer SEAN PATRICK and what luck -- *WELCOME* CHUCK!
You read it right. You heard it right. You sensated it right. The riff's rich in double entendre's sultry swirls. That's Majik's due.
Aye, brazen Braeden's put a spell on You!
~ Grace o'my thanks for comin' round with such kind words. Look for me to mesmerize in kind, haunting where you hail wordfling
~ Absolutely*Kate
Big fire from a small flame!
Blazingly beautiful!
Hey Kate, magic girl greetings at the Bijou! This is indeed a sparkly, flickering piece full of enchantment crafted with magic words.
Just finished Wading Home by Rosalyn Story. Have you read it? A post-Katrina story set in New Orleans and Baton Rouge.
Adieu from across the oceans!
Denise
Hi again! Forgot to say you can read my Haunting story for #fridayflash and #RFWer here if you so desire:
http://flashquake.blogspot.com
Denise
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